Fatty Liver Posted October 6, 2014 Report Share Posted October 6, 2014 http://www.winnipegfreepress.com/local/A-man-with-a-game-plan-278040812.html?cx_navSource=d-tiles-1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NotoriousBIG Posted October 6, 2014 Report Share Posted October 6, 2014 Too long. Turner is usually a little more succinct. Editor could've drilled away 500 words at least. Thank you for posting though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Dee Posted October 6, 2014 Report Share Posted October 6, 2014 Too long. Turner is usually a little more succinct. Editor could've drilled away 500 words at least. Thank you for posting though. Don't forget, Turner is writing a book, this is just practice for him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noeller Posted October 6, 2014 Report Share Posted October 6, 2014 with a writer as good as Randy Turner, you don't ask for LESS words....... Mr. Perfect, mbrg, rebusrankin and 1 other 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NotoriousBIG Posted October 6, 2014 Report Share Posted October 6, 2014 with a writer as good as Randy Turner, you don't ask for LESS words....... Uh... no, you have an editor who should do that for him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fatty Liver Posted October 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2014 I liked the article and the subject matter. Very impressive what an 11 year old mind can conceive but even more impressive when he follows through on the plan. Can't say a bad word about Turner when compared with the dregs that haunt us now. Noeller 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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