http://www.winnipegfreepress.com/local/A-man-with-a-game-plan-278040812.html?cx_navSource=d-tiles-1

Too long. Turner is usually a little more succinct. Editor could've drilled away 500 words at least. 

 

Thank you for posting though. 

Too long. Turner is usually a little more succinct. Editor could've drilled away 500 words at least. 

 

Thank you for posting though. 

 

Don't forget, Turner is writing a book, this is just practice for him. 

with a writer as good as Randy Turner,  you don't ask for LESS words.......

with a writer as good as Randy Turner,  you don't ask for LESS words.......

 

Uh... no, you have an editor who should do that for him. 

I liked the article and the subject matter.  Very impressive what an 11 year old mind can conceive but even more impressive when he follows through on the plan.

Can't say a bad word about Turner when compared with the dregs that haunt us now.